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Grace’s Poem: “Silence Listens”

Posted by: marybankblog | January 31, 2008 | 15 Comments |
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Great poem Grace! I hope it was worth all the re-recording that we had to do…again and again…and again!!!
Mr Quigley

Smashing, Grace! :-) What excellent speaking, I am well impressed.
I’m not sure which is my favourite bit – either the “trees havering to the wind” or the “tinsel laughing on the tree”. I suppose I’ll just have to listen again… and again.
Well done you.

lovley to hear your poem Grace,
you have really listened to all the interesting sounds in nature, and made a poem that shows how much you really care about nature.
I hope you will write lots more poems about nature.
best of luck
lizzie
ps I like your voki picture

Love it Grace well done keep up the good work.

I totally love your poem Grace!!!!!!!!!!!

We are both very impressed with your use of language Grace.
Very clear and very well expressed. ~Well done!

Very well done Grace. Good pictures and well read.

Grace I just loved your poem. My favourite line is the ‘tinsel laughing on the tree!’ Fabulous!!

What a fantastic poem and so well read.
Couldn’t decide which line I liked best the ants crying or the worm sneezing. I look forward to hearing and seeing more wonderful work from the p1-4 class at Marybank.

Grace, it was wonderful to hear you reciting your poem! It was lovely and clear and no wonder everyone is so proud of you.

Well done Grace – I enjoyed your poem and your lovely descriptions!
Sandra

It is so lovely to hear your voice Gracie–brought back such good memories of your visit–

Well chosen words Gracie–I don’t think I have ever heard silence described so well.

Tomorrow we are off to see Ian in Dubai– We will be back near end of feb–

Love to you, Marsali and all the family.

Brenda

VERY good voki!!!!!!;-)

Great work, what an imagination, very proud of you.
Very well done
Dad

I hope you are feeling better soon.

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