Grace’s Poem: “Silence Listens”
Posted by: marybankblog | January 31, 2008 | 15 Comments |Responses - Create a free edublog to get your own comment avatar (and more!)
Great poem Grace! I hope it was worth all the re-recording that we had to do…again and again…and again!!!
Mr Quigley
Smashing, Grace!
What excellent speaking, I am well impressed.
I’m not sure which is my favourite bit – either the “trees havering to the wind” or the “tinsel laughing on the tree”. I suppose I’ll just have to listen again… and again.
Well done you.
By: Grace's mum on January 31, 2008
at 4:17 am
lovley to hear your poem Grace,
you have really listened to all the interesting sounds in nature, and made a poem that shows how much you really care about nature.
I hope you will write lots more poems about nature.
best of luck
lizzie
ps I like your voki picture
By: Lizzie McDougall on January 31, 2008
at 5:47 am
We are both very impressed with your use of language Grace.
Very clear and very well expressed. ~Well done!
By: M & W Skinner on January 31, 2008
at 11:57 am
Very well done Grace. Good pictures and well read.
By: M & W Skinner on January 31, 2008
at 11:59 am
Grace I just loved your poem. My favourite line is the ‘tinsel laughing on the tree!’ Fabulous!!
By: Mrs McClelland on January 31, 2008
at 12:37 pm
What a fantastic poem and so well read.
Couldn’t decide which line I liked best the ants crying or the worm sneezing. I look forward to hearing and seeing more wonderful work from the p1-4 class at Marybank.
Grace, it was wonderful to hear you reciting your poem! It was lovely and clear and no wonder everyone is so proud of you.
By: Stewart on January 31, 2008
at 2:32 pm
Well done Grace – I enjoyed your poem and your lovely descriptions!
Sandra
By: Sandra on February 1, 2008
at 4:17 am
It is so lovely to hear your voice Gracie–brought back such good memories of your visit–
Well chosen words Gracie–I don’t think I have ever heard silence described so well.
Tomorrow we are off to see Ian in Dubai– We will be back near end of feb–
Love to you, Marsali and all the family.
Brenda
By: Auntie Brenda on February 4, 2008
at 9:19 am
Great work, what an imagination, very proud of you.
Very well done
Dad
